My long story

Posted on June 10th, 2008 in info tech by brads  Tagged , ,

My long story is 6 pages long and still in progress. I think I do need to check it for any mistakes. They are fighting againest am ailen race called the Tyrrhnoids which are incharge of the glaxaly but not for long, will the Tyrrhnoids win or will the Rebels emerge triumphent? Answer: The Rebels did win, but just scraped home in a valiant fight to win the war. The ending was when they were in the sewers to find something to win the valiant fight. With the help of the Navman they got home.

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